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  首先 练习一篇求职信~

  要求:You are looking for an interesting and challenging summer job. Write an email, using between 320 and 350 words, applying for the post of student tour leader. The school’s email address is [email protected]

  To: [email protected]

  Subject:Job Application

  Attachment:CV.doc(10KB)

  Dear Sir/Madam,

  With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's edition of The Times of Malta, I am interested in applying for the post of tour leader for Italian students learning English as a foreign language at your school of English.[1]

  I am 22 years old and I am currently studying for a diploma in Tourism at MCAST. After that I hope to follow a career in the travel industry.[2] During the last summer holidays I worked as a youth leader in various school projects and I enjoyed the work very much because it involved organising various recreational and academic activities for students at school. Next summer I would like to do something more varied and challenging, and for this reason I am interested in the job of tour leader.[3]

  I feel that I would be well-suited for this job as I enjoy working with young people very much. I have a lot of energy and enthusiasm and am also responsible and reliable.[4]

  I have attached my CV as a Word document. You will notice that I have supervised children on a range of sports and cultural activities within the school Scout Group./ I have also, on several occasions, been responsible for transport arrangements and tickets./ On two separate occasions I have also carried out voluntary work abroad, at a summer camp for school children. I was group leader and besides organising many social and cultural activities, I was also responsible for the children’s well-being throughout the whole experience./ I am also fluent in English, so I will also be a good influence on the students of your English School as they can practise their English outside school hours.[5]

  I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for interview any weekday afternoon and you can email me or telephone me on the number below.[6]

  I look forward to hearing from you soon.

  Yours faithfully,

  John Mizzi

  tel:99043612

  [1]首先表达自己信息来源(advertisment),表达求职意向(tour leader)。

  [2]表达自己的职业规划(career in travel industry)。

  [3]简要介绍前期工作经历(I worked as...)及收获体会(I enjoyed it because...)。

  [4]开始论证:为什么自己适合这一工作,自己的优势在哪里(I would be well-suited for this job as...)。

  [5]具体描述自己的闪光点。通过举例说明自己培养了哪些能力。

  [6]最后表达感谢,留下联系方式。

  注意:1.时态。求职信使用的时态根据表达内容的不同而变化,求职意向、自己的优势等长时间没有改变的东西一般用现在时;职业规划可以用将来时或I would like to;描述工作经历等过去的事情可用过去式(I was group leader,这里是单纯陈述过去特殊的一个时间点上“我是领队”),强调过去发生的事情对现在的影响(如,I have also carried out voluntary work abroad, at a summer camp for school children. 这里是强调“因为我参加过国外的志愿活动,在这方面我有更多的经验”).

  再来一篇~ 要求:Write an email to apply for the job advertised as follows: Wanted: Temporary secretary for general office duties. Applicant must have secondary school level of education and be computer literate

  . Good work habits and ability to work in a team necessary. Send your application via email to the Senior Clerk, Mr Muscat, on [email protected] . You should write between 180 and 200 words.

  来试一试~Sample

  to:[email protected]

  subjectz: job application

  attachment: School leaving certificate.doc(10KB)

  Dear Mr Muscat,

  I am writing in connection with your advertisement for a temporary secretary.

  I am 16 years old and I have just completed my secondary education. I have seven SEC level passes including Maths, Maltese and English and I also have my ECDL* licence. I am very skilled at using computers and I regularly use Word to write documents, and Outlook to send emails. Moreover, I know how to make use of spellcheckers and the thesaurus to improve my writing.

  During my years in secondary school I always did quite well and received good reports from my teachers. Attached please find a scanned copy of my school leaving certificate. I am tidy and organized in my work and as a student, my notes were always properly filed and my homework and schoolwork were neat.

  I would very much like to be considered for the job as I feel I have the necessary skills and qualifications. In addition, I believe I am hard-working and though I do not have any work experience I am very motivated to learn.

  I look forward to hearing from you,

  Regards,

  Jonathan Brincat

  *ECDL:等同国际电脑使用执照。 The European Computer Driving Licence (ECDL), also known as International Computer Driving Licence (ICDL) in non European countries, is a computer literacy certification programme provided by ECDL Foundation[1] a not-for-profitorganisation.(wiki/baidu)

  从这两个sample可以看出求职信的结构并不是一定的,但是每一段都需要有且只有一个主题,每段的第一句话尽量要把整段的内容概括出来~

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